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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:21 pm

    “TJ, let us put an end to this battle once and for all.” TJ nodded. He augmented Peorth’s weapon and casted Radiance on Su temporarily releasing her from where she was bound, and she stumbled forth. Peorth quickly dashed towards Choen Palm blocking her shots with her spear and closing the distance thrusting her spear into her chest. Peorth pulled it out, shoved it in two more times then spun it around like a windmill and slamming it down on her releasing a small burst of light. Choen Palm held out her hand in an attempt to create a black hole spell but Peorth silenced her and continued attacking mercilessly, slashing her and finally impaling her once more, throwing her over her head and plunging her spear into the ground as she said, “Field of Blades!” Spears shot up from the ground and impaled Choen Palm, and began to release as TJ and Su both said, “Two Hundred Arrows of Light!” The spells followed up one after the next constantly launching Choen Palm in each and every direction.

    Su began chanting as the spells continued and TJ started a separate chant. “Now is the time! Seal Choen Palm away once and for all!” Peorth shouted. Su raised both hands in the air and shouted, “Thor’s Invoked Wrath!” Massive thunder bolts crashed down and singed Choen Palm and continued to rain down as TJ’s chanting continued and Su sustained the spell. Finally TJ stopped chanting and held his hands out, over the edge of the bridge and said, “Upon my will I call you forth. To return light to this world so this may someday become a paradise, this sacrifice I offer. Testament of the Hero!” Su ended the spell as TJ leapt upwards, jumped once more and grabbed Choen Palm descending downwards into a deadly spiral towards a seal emitting bright lights all the way at the bottom of the Laboratory. “You and I will be sealed away permanently, so you’ll never escape and take over this world!” TJ shouted as they shot downwards.

    “You idiotic boy! Let go of me this instant! You must be mad to seal yourself away along with me!” Choen Palm shouted as she struggled to break free but could not. Su looked mortified and quickly leapt downwards after the two. “TJ! STOP! DON’T SEAL YOURSELF AWAY WITH HER!” She shouted but proved to be of no use. The three quickly descended and soon approached the spell, and Su knew she had to do something. She took the wings from TJ and pushed herself as hard as she could downwards towards the two and soon was able to catch up and surpass them. “Su?!” TJ shouted taking his focus off of Choen Palm for a few moments. Su landed on a nearby platform, leapt off and collided with the two sending them off course from the spell. Choen Palm managed to get her good arm free and started punching TJ as hard as she could in the ribs until he would loosen his grip.

    TJ refused to let go and tightly held on trying to pull her back towards the spell but did not succeed in his attempts. Choen Palm continued to punch him and the pain became excruciating, until a loud crack sounded through his body and TJ let go, the two quickly falling to the ground. Su returned the wings to TJ as he was about to make contact with the ground and landed with a painful thud, tumbling across it. Choen Palm landed flat on her but still managed to stand. She looked at TJ for a few moments but just shrugged and teleported away. “I was...so...close...” TJ whispered watching as his spell faded away and his vision became blurry. Blood slowly seeped from his mouth as he closed his eyes and coughed weakly. Su eventually landed down beside him and looked upon his body as she whispered, “sorry TJ. But there’s so much more to this than you understand.”

    Epilogue: A Lullaby for the Cerebian Hero

    TJ had been unconscious since the battle with Choen Palm, and weeks had already passed since then. Peorth turned down Verun’s offer to celebrate Yggdrasil’s mission because she felt that it would lower the morale of Yggdrasil’s members and make them feel down again, like they had from the aftermath of the battle. Peorth had Kooh take TJ to a nearby hospital while the rest of the guild who still had energy handled the remaining missions and returned to where they were meant to go. Those who had the time and were in Elias would occasionally come and visit TJ in his hospital bed as he rested quietly, leaving flowers, get-well cards and other small gifts.

    Peorth seemed to had taken the blow the hardest. She had blamed herself constantly, saying it was her lack of leadership and her decision not to tell TJ everything. Though TJ only had a few broken and a minor bit of mana poisoning, Peorth was still worried. She did not speak to the members much, and everyone seemed a bit inactive. Since the incident no one had seen Su either. It became difficult to tell whether she had chosen to stay hidden or she could not leave the crystal because of TJ’s concussion.

    Choen Palm’s whereabouts were unknown, but some of Yggdrasil’s members stayed on the lookout for her, and any information that may lead to her whereabouts. The matter itself, of her escape was hushed up and those who did mention it were often said not to mention anything of it again if they were over heard, if they were to be seen again. Since the battle an uneasy air was about everyone. Nobody smiled, joked, or laughed, or even dared try to be cheery from pure fear of being scorned. Time felt as if it was passing slowly; days, weeks, even months went by but TJ showed no sign of waking up. Some of Yggdrasil’s members seemed to be lightening up though, trying to improve the overall mood of the place and bring back hope to those who had lost it.

    The doctors and nurses often checked up on TJ but none were too sure why he had not woken up. All of them were completely puzzled by the phenomenon and requested that specialists come in to check the situation for themselves. What really puzzled them most is how he would occasionally give off a dark mana and mutter words none could understand in a demonic voice. Late one night Amu came to see TJ, where most of the doctors or other staff got scared off by the unusual way TJ acted. She stayed and looked after him, occasionally brushing his hair out of his face and gently singing to him when he started to thrash and heavily breathe while emitting his evil aura.

    She looked at him in a melancholic way and said, “You’ve been through a lot haven’t you TJ? It is quite a sad life you live...you’re constantly being pushed and always having to move forward. What you’ve faced isn’t even the end...but someday you’ll be free of all of this, and Su will too. I know when you find out the truth you’ll forgive her for what happened then. Not that you’d be mad anyway.” She laughed. TJ started to give off his evil aura and Amu started to sing for him once more, calming him down and stopping him. She looked out the window to the waning moon as she sung,

    “...I will always be by your side so you are never lonely, my angel, my absolute, my one, my only...”

    To Be Continued...
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Tue Aug 09, 2011 10:23 pm

    Can't believe I actually did it. I'm so tired. Sorry but you'll have to do without the italics for now >.<. finsihing it was my main focus and now im going to crash. leaving in like 5-6 hours so i need sleep. Hope you found it interesting and I'll see you in roughly three weeks ^^. Until we meet again!
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:26 am

    new part is pretty cool, i'll admit that much
    buuuut, wtf is up with that damn cliffhanger?>.>
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Fri Sep 02, 2011 6:25 am

    Finally back lol. The reason I left it as a cliffhanger is 'cause Frequency, and the continuation with the Cerebians Sanctuary, are two different stories as a whole. Books don't usually have the end or to be continued at the end of them, but since this isn't printed if I left it blank it just felt a little too empty lol.

    Whatever else I'm about to say isn't something that you need to read. Just me kinda ranting lol.

    But anyway, though Frequency is finished it's not exactly the finished product. I still have to go through it and fix it up. The way I was writing wasn't proper(considering the paragraphs and stuff) and some of the chapters were too short. But if you think it was good, I was thinking of making the good copy go public. At least by starting with fanfiction.net lol. There weren't too many LT fanfics there. So yeah, prolly over the next 2-3 weeks or so I'm gonna go back to Frequency and make some changes. I'll keep pretty much all the original ideas and concepts, but add on to things that seemed lackluster. I'll also probably type up the first chapter of Sanctuary when I take the time to do it lol. The style will be different from the old one, looking more deeply into the characters' traits and what they think about and how they react, but it will also be undertaking a much more mature storyline, as well as battles. From what it was in Frequency's early days to what it is at the end, it'll continue on with that. I think it's better if I don't try to limit it so unecessarily. So yeah, new themes, new characters, places that don't even exist in LT and whatever other ridiculous things I come up with
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Sat Sep 03, 2011 7:05 am

    some books do idiot >.>
    i got mad when it said, " to beh continueded "
    but yea.....
    anyway, the story was pretty cool,so do whatever
    annnd, so sanctuary is a story of freaquancy or is it just part 2 of da story?
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Sun Sep 04, 2011 11:23 am

    You could say its part 2. Since there was more than one ending, this is the continuation of the ending you read in Frequency. Except it will continue from after the time skip of roughly three months.
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Mon Sep 05, 2011 7:05 am

    oh i see...
    sounds cool
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Mon Sep 05, 2011 2:54 pm

    Yeah I'll try to type up the first chapter etc. today and hopefully finish it by today or tommorow. Then I'll get back to work on Frequency
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Mon Sep 05, 2011 4:17 pm

    mhmmmk'
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Wed Sep 07, 2011 7:40 am

    Okay that plan crashed and burned, but I have a better idea. If I work on the good copy of Frequency in the morning and Sanctuary in the afternoons, I can get both worked on and eventually finished over a long period of time. Between doing what I normally do I'll try to find the time for it. Since things are gonna be busier than before I might not get as much done as I did over the past few months, but I'll still put in the work when I can.
    So I'll start posting Sanctuary in parts like I did with Frequency and continue working on it when I can.
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Wed Sep 07, 2011 2:49 pm

    fail lol
    but mhmmk'
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Wed Sep 07, 2011 6:08 pm

    Yeah that's how it's gonna be lol. I'll be posting some of it before I sleep. So very very soon lol
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Thu Sep 08, 2011 5:47 am

    lame

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    Re: Frequency

    Post  CurtThe2nd on Sun Oct 21, 2012 9:18 am

    TJ, you need to write an actual novel. Or just publish this story. I mean, I'd buy it.
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Mon Oct 22, 2012 10:51 am

    holy shit, he's alive o-o
    lol nice to see you back from the dead

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    Re: Frequency

    Post  CurtThe2nd on Tue Oct 23, 2012 5:51 pm

    Thanks. But yeah, I was watching some TV the other day, and they mentioned something about frequencies... And then it hit me: I'm in a FanFiction. Quit the game though, can't have anything distracting me from school. So, are you two the only people using the site anymore?
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  TJ on Wed Oct 24, 2012 10:02 am

    CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURT it's been a while lol. But yeah we are the only ones that come here anymore I think. Sadly lol. Before I had left I had waited to see if anyone would come back to the guild, but it looks like it's completely dead, so I take it everyone else had reasons for quitting too. That's life I guess lol.
    After my hiatus I came back to the game to finish Frequency and found myself playing it all over again lol. Surprisingly though, I managed to finish Frequency last year, so I started the good copy and I post the chapters on Fanfiction.net now. You should check it out, I made it a lot better than the me could like 5 years ago lol. You could read the finished rough copy somewhere in the forum spam though. If it wasn't a fanfiction, I'd totally make a book out of it. But it's just for the experience anyway, and for building my fanbase lol. Started an original though. Maybe someday that'll be a book lol.
    But anyway, it's good to have you back. Or at least know your alive lol
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    Re: Frequency

    Post  Suuba on Thu Oct 25, 2012 10:55 am

    yeah it's only been us for the past year or so. I don't really play much now either, due to my fucking computer, but hey good to see your not dead

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