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    Post  Toejam Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:57 pm

    Hero

    Prologue

    “Though I may be the Sage of Wind, something in me tells me that I am destined for something even greater than this. If I could just find a sign I…” (Heath Karin)

     

    Heath solemnly rode the winds through the sea of clouds towards a destination very few knew aside from the few trusted people in the entirety of Azenham. As he neared it he could see the temple resting upon a levitating piece of land. He drifted down towards the entrance but remained a few feet above the ground. He looked down upon his hands and took a deep breath. The tattoos upon his hands and those hidden beneath the long sleeved white robe he wore were reminders of his identity; his silver hair, mastery of wind and even his eyes more so. The only thing among his many traits that still eluded his understanding was the symbol upon his left hand.

    He looked towards the temple’s entrance and breathed out in an attempt to calm himself. It was not the first time he had visited the place; after all, it was his home. Returning was not what had ailed him though. The confrontation that awaited him on the other side of the entrance haunted him for days, but the longer he avoided the matter the more it encroached upon his conscious mind.

    Heath knew precious little of the people of Azenham. He had only read of them and caught word through various sources of news and important events in the land, often times through his own teacher. Leaving his teacher aside, he had become familiar with two others: the first being the king himself, a man he had only met once, but from the single meeting could tell that the man was everything the people said he was, a truly benevolent ruler. The second was the man the king had trusted above all else, Chancellor Heinrichter. The chancellor often times would visit the temple on business when Heath was a boy, to discuss important matters with the boy’s teacher. Once his business was completed, he would spend time with the boy telling him of the places he had been to and teaching him various things that his master would not about the world outside of the temple. Over the years the boy grew fond of the chancellor and strived to better himself to impress him upon his visits. In the recent years, the chancellor had stopped visiting him, and he began to feel a large portion of the meaning behind his hard work was lost upon the disappearance of his visitor.

    Regardless of the frequency of the questions he asked his master about the king’s trustee and his sudden lack of visits, he had never received an answer, and at first the matter worried him greatly. Doubts began to form within his mind and they clouded his judgements, often times showing through his training and angering his teacher. The man was sure to emphasize the importance of a clear conscience and absolute focus when using powerful spells because of how dangerous they could be to the caster and those around them if the user is reckless with their abilities. He had managed to proceed from then on through pure skill, and in time he had finally been able to part ways with his doubts and regain his focus, coming to terms with the fact he would not likely see one of the only people who had become dear to him.

    Of the few political matters his master had told him of, Heath was informed that the king had been assassinated, and that in his place the chancellor had been given a limited set of administrative authority, until the council could find an heir to the throne. The queen had passed away before her husband, but many had heard the rumour that the two had a daughter that had gone missing many a years ago. The council had adventurers and other officials alike all searching for the young girl, but their quest was to no avail. Their search had produced nothing, and with no heir or other blood relatives to inherit the throne, the only person that could would be the person closest to the king, being the chancellor. The matter took years to be settled, clearly displaying the council was reluctant to settle for him, but the group had little to no choice in the matter.

    Heath brushed the stray silver strands of his bangs from his eyes and sighed. By that point he was old enough to understand that there were matters more important than visiting a faraway companion. He had an entire world to look after. If he could, Heath would fly to the capital and visit the chancellor himself, but as his fate had dictated it was not meant to be. Just as Azenham needed the chancellor to lead it, it needed the sages to protect it, and he was next in line to be the Sage of Wind. His place was here, and whatever waited for him in the outside world would remain as nothing more than the stories he had known as a child. Though he had become content with this, someone had other plans for him.

    When he had become ‘of age’ according to his master, Heath had received his very first carrier. A bird similar to his master’s, but much younger like the student himself, was what he had been rewarded with. It was a means for him to communicate with those of the outside world without the need for leaving his post. At first he had only sent out letters and occasionally received some in turn, listing events that occurred within his race’s domain and those that involved the world as a whole, and others times he found no mail at all. Following the king’s passing, he began to receive strange mails from an unknown source telling him of the acts of the chancellor, often times pertaining to the dark elves and how he had treated them. There were special rules pertaining to them, and breaking them had dire consequences; Heath was well aware of this, but the mails he had received about the executions of refugees, women and children included, did not sound believable to him in the slightest. The chancellor he knew would never do something so merciless.

    Years ago after the people of Azenham had ventured to another plane of existence, a place that the entirety of the world had feared, many of those that had returned had been afflicted with an incurable disease, and one that struck an even greater fear into the people, causing them to believe that their end was nigh. In order to combat this and to prevent further panic, the king had commissioned one of the races of Azenham to build a terminal beneath the capital to house those who had been deemed to have the disease prior to his death. The project had gone on for years, but had never truly seen completion. In the last letter Heath had received, he was told of this and the truth behind the sudden halt in the project. According to the mail, the chancellor had deemed the project unnecessary and shut it down, leaving only half finished buildings and very little else within the terminal.

    Heath wanted to doubt the legitimacy of the mail, but the chancellor aside, the only people that may have enough power to do so would be the council, and not even they knew the exact reason the project had been cancelled, but in a legitimate mail from the council itself he had caught word of the matter, without the mentioning of the chancellor. He wondered why the matter had been kept under wraps, but he had kept his speculations from his master over the period after his discovery. As the chancellor’s coronation grew nearer, Heath realized he had to act before the opportunity had passed him by. In order to do so, he had to face the first and one of the greatest hurdles, his own master.

    He clenched his fist and sternly moved forward to meet with his master. As he approached the entrance the swirling energy that would guide him to his master remained in the doorway. He took a deep breath and placed his hand within it, feeling it pulling his entire body into it. Through this gateway he would be brought directly into the sanctum where his master resided, but the experience of travelling was something that had haunted him. The rest of his body was slowly being pulled as he took another step forward into it and was submerged in darkness, the sensation of his body being hurled through space only ending as he found himself within the confines of the temple. He collapsed to his knees and breathed a sigh of relief.

     

    The sanctum of the temple was a large, open room with very little in it, save for Heath and his master. The walls of the temple had a series of characters engraved upon them; many dating back to hundreds of years before their time, telling of the beliefs and discoveries of the sages before Heath and his master. The ground beneath them had a massive magic circle engraved in it, featuring the symbol of their kind in the center while the outer portions of it featured runes, each with different meanings. Heath’s mentor remained in the center of it with his palms facing each other seemingly meditating; the circle glowed with a golden aura as he did.

    “Master…I have returned.” Heath said sternly as he rose to his feet.

    Over the next minute he had received no response, and as he was about to speak again Isaac stopped his action and the magic circle beneath him lost its glow. As he opened his eyes, the tattoos spanning his body gained a vibrant blue glow and the winds surrounded him, raising him to his feet and allowing him to levitate above the ground. His shoulder-length silver moved with the winds that enveloped him as did his robes, emblazoned with the symbol of wind just as Heath’s was.

    He silently examined his student for a couple of moments then finally spoke, a commanding voice followed. “I can hear the defiance in your tone Heath. This is not like you at all. Speak.”

    Heath swallowed the response hard. Just as he had said, it was very unlike him to speak out against his mentor because he had no reason to. He knew that if he wanted to make a change he would have to overcome this trial. The lives of the people of Azenham were on the line, and he may have been the only person willing to stand against the injustice. “I am confident you are aware of the matter relating to the Mercy terminals, correct?” His master raised his eyebrow to the question, leaving the answer open, but because he did not deny it Heath believed it to be true. “The living conditions of the incomplete terminals are not acceptable. There are hundreds of people living in them, but many of them have no homes, little to no food or water, and are unable to receive any form of health care. People are dying Master, and no one seems to be acting upon this!”

    Isaac’s expression was not fazed in the slightest. “What do you suggest?”

    “We have to act. The opinions of the sages have some of the greatest impact in all of Azenham. Second to the king, we have the power to make a change if we so desire! I beg of you, Master, allow me to go to the capital and speak with the council to receive an audience with the chancellor! We must bring this matter to his attention and save these innocent people!” He clenched his fists. “I know I am young and inexperienced, but Azenham needs you here. Therefore, allow me to go in your stead to make a change in this matter.”

    “To go to such lengths…do you know what you are saying?” Heath nodded and his mentor furrowed his brows. “Clearly you do not. To make such a declaration would be the equivalent of going against the chancellor’s word. You know precious little of politics Heath. You should keep your mind away from the things you do not understand and focus on your sage training. You are still very young and have much to learn.”

    He grit his teeth. The frustration within him was building; he knew his master was headstrong, though he rarely needed to show it because Heath did not go against his word, but part of him still wanted to believe that if he remained resolute on the matter he could bring his obstinate teacher to his senses. “One of the things that you had taught me was to have compassion for all living things. The lives of our people, and all the other races…the plants, the creatures of our world, all of it! If we would so willingly throw those lives away, we are no different than killers! I have the utmost respect for the chancellor but this cannot go on!”

    Isaac’s expression shifted slightly, his eyebrows hinting that he was beginning to get agitated. “I am beginning to see that you have grasped a miniscule understanding of your very own position as a sage. We are only the keepers of Azenham and its people. We are not its messiah, nor are we its sovereign. The chancellor was not chosen to be the next king solely because the late king had trusted him. Chancellor Heinrichter carries the weight of our world upon his shoulders. None of us could fathom the burden he bears; we can only walk in his wake and bear a small portion of this burden with him. Every decision he makes impacts our world as a whole, so we cannot pick and choose solely because we are against it. Sacrifices must be made, lives will be lost and at times there is nothing that we can do to change this. Would you really put the needs of the few before the needs of the many?”

    “That is not…I did not mean…” He lightly bit down upon his lip. He was at a loss of words, and had he let this continue it would be the end of the conversation, and the end of the matter altogether. If he tried to mention it again at a later date he knew his mentor would not discuss it a second time.

    “The Branded are not something to be trifled with Heath. You have read the legends and tales pertaining to the Animus Legionem and how they had ravaged our world. If it were not for the heroes of that age, we would not exist, nor would anyone else in this world. Those that have been marked by the creatures are a danger to all of us. Regardless of whether the terminals are complete or not, we cannot have the Branded amidst the other civilians. Should the disease spread, it may bring about the apocalypse. If the near extinction of the Herrenah means anything to you, then you are as aware as I am that this is not a matter that we can treat lightly. Whatever Chancellor Heinrichter decides is exactly how things shall be; if he and the council decided that the late king’s decision was not the right choice, then so be it. We will not go against his word.”

    “There must be something that we can do for them! These are the lives of people’s loved ones that we are so freely passing judgement upon! Could Chancellor Heinrichter make the same decisions if it was his wife or his children? Could you throw the lives of the people you care about away so easily if you were in his shoes? Would you do the same if I were ‘Branded’?!” Heath shouted with reckless abandon. “What we are doing is nothing short from playing god. Can you so easily write it off under ‘the needs of the many over the few’?”

    Isaac’s face contorted into one displaying the utter scorn he felt from what his student had said to him. “Those are nothing short of the words of a…a heretic!” He snarled. “The king is the conduit to the pantheon! To make such a claim is not far from rebelling against the gods themselves! I will discuss this matter no further with you Heath, now get out of my sight and do not return until you have reflected upon your actions!”

    “This is not what the gods would have wanted, and this is certainly not the proper choice for the people! Call me a heretic if you must, but I will stand for this no longer. I am going to settle this matter myself with or without your blessing, Father.”

    “If you choose to leave now then do not return. I will not welcome a heretic into this holy place.”

    Heath closed his eyes as he turned away and his father turned his back to him. “Then so be it.”
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    Post  Toejam Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:58 pm

    This is the possibly finished version of the prologue. Next chapter gets right into the thick of the action with Bruce and then switches to Heinrichter. At least, that's the base of what I have planned. Showing the storyboards could be questionable.
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    Post  Suuba Thu Jun 27, 2013 12:39 am

    holy fucking shit lots of shit to read
    anyway, I thought t was pretty fucking good, got lost maybe once or twice but I figured thst shit out lmfao
    I keep forgetting this is a original story but hey wasn't there gonna be a slight mash-up of the two stories?
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    Post  Toejam Fri Jun 28, 2013 2:31 pm

    Actually there is indeed! You're gonna see the beginning of it in Sanctuary's second harmony. For the sake of continuity, I'm gonna say that the characters featured in Sanctuary are from a separate world line from Project H/H cause if I try to merge the two, it won't make sense as it goes along. With this I'll follow a similar storyline where the characters had made different choices, and wound up on Midgard BECAUSE of it.
    It all comes back to the 'clairvoyance' theme that's going to be a big part of both stories. You're gonna be surprised at the stuff in the coming chapters.
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    Post  Suuba Fri Jun 28, 2013 6:28 pm

    is that a different arc in Santuary's plot thing? wait didnt that thing have a couple arcs o-ofuck im forgetting shit
    oh yay that thing again
    oh Ifound yo broody ass guy (lmfao I saw the twtter bs) the moody broody elf that hates mages lmfao (he's fenris from da2)
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    Post  Toejam Thu Jul 04, 2013 8:20 pm

    Ah I see where you got confused.
    Well, since you don't mind spoilers I'll clarify things. Firstly, what you're thinking of is the arc from Sanctuary, which is the two Arias-Aria of the Prodigal Legend Kasumi and Aria of God's Governor Suuba. These two cover the fall of Xenym and Hanamah.
    What's here is from the original work, which will require a lot more clarifying lol. But to sum it up in one sentence, the sages and the god's governors are not the same thing. Though, in Frequency's canon the sages God's Governors are actually based off of the sages. Well, I guess you'd say they're closer to the four heroes of the elements than the sages themselves, but you'll be hearing about that later. If you don't mind the spoilers, I'll tell you here.
    Heroes of the elements:
    That too, actually plays a major part in Sanctuary. Like we discussed before, the two are actually connected in some strange way lol. Or rather, a lot of them. Though, in Sanctuary I won't directly mention these things. I'll hint at it, and do the same with Project Hero/Heroine if the canon can remain to what I had originally intended for it, but if not it'll remain canon only to the Frequency series. I won't completely neglect the rest though; some of the occurrences I originally had planned will be told through the character from that world, so it'd be like spoiling the story without spoiling the story lol. All of the things he speaks of happened in the original world line, but in the actual story things take a different turn. Probably one for the better. That explanation went on longer than I thought lol. Though, I hope it cleared things up a bit.
    As for the story itself, I'm still waiting on edits for the storyboards so I've been working on Sanctuary. It's been coming along rather quickly since I don't have to juggle both.
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    Post  Suuba Thu Jul 11, 2013 1:45 am

    I seeeeeeeeeeee, well I knew the sages and the governors were fuckin different. well I know your readers over on ffic will be confused as fuck lmfao. god it's like you like to rant about this shit lmfao but yeah it did clear up somethings.
    well I know if you tried to do that shit you'd be even more tred, that's like me tryin to do a bunch of fuckin detailed artat one fuckin tme.
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    Post  Toejam Thu Jul 11, 2013 9:56 am

    My work does have a tendency to confuse, but after reading through it and looking back you can find a lot of things you might not have noticed before, unless I screwed it up. Wouldn't be surprised if that were the case lol.
    Honestly I do have a bad habit of ranting when it comes to my work lol. There aren't too many people I can actually really talk to them about, and there are even less willing to hear it, so its a refreshing change.
    But anyway more on topic lol. Both are gonna be really contained stories, so those who don't wanna read Project H/H can still enjoy Frequency/Sanctuary to the fullest and vice versa. Those who read both will get to see the worlds on a whole different level.
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    Post  Toejam Thu Aug 08, 2013 5:56 pm

    Got some new content for you to look at. This is a few of the scenes from chapter 1, including what you saw on tumblr. Most of it was written today so nobody's really seen it yet, so lemme' know what you think. With some of the references I picked up on tumblr I tried to make some improvements, hopefully for the better.

    Hero Chapter 1:

    There's still more to come, so hopefully I'll have it finished before I leave for vacation.
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    Post  Toejam Wed Sep 11, 2013 4:02 pm

    Hero chapter 1:

    Big news for this. The fact that its done, and Heath will likely see some huge changes in the near future. Since the guy who writes him seems to have little to no interest in how the story goes, I`m either gonna change Heath into a new character or cut him out entirely. If anything I can`t make do with a half-hearted character or it brings the story down entirely. Especially a main character.
    I haven`t exactly made up my mind on the matter, but if I do plan to keep him I might ask you to write the Wind Sage's apprentice, if you feel up to it. I'll give you the same outline the others went through so you'll know what you need and redo the prologue from there. Hopefully it doesn't come down to that, but if it does it'll be a big help if you consider that a possibility. I've gone so far with the current plan it'd be hard to shift the roles now.

    Regardless, that's the news for now. Might start working on Innocent now that this is out of the way and I'm back.

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